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P#8082 2013-12-21 10:39 ( Edited 2013-12-25 14:32)

here are my tough:

  • too hard
  • too many misplaced items
  • too many random monster apparition
    -you used the default items, which means your level has no graphics.
    -tanks are too strong, their hitbox is way to small.
    -tank textures could be reworked ( looks kinda weird )

On overall I'd say it's a pretty random level.

P#8094 2013-12-24 08:38 ( Edited 2013-12-24 13:41)

That critique was not constructive at ALL

P#8095 2013-12-24 09:29 ( Edited 2013-12-24 14:29)

Well, I like receiving critique like this. whit those critique you know what you need. easier to understand and I think it's pretty constructive. It's constructive but not fun to read, well, and people can agree with what I say, everything I stated in my comment is true.

It's called proffesionalism

  • He got a free copy of the game and said he would make serious game.
    Makes me sad to know I paid for this. :$

But I never said voxatron is not good it's AWSOME

P#8097 2013-12-24 10:58 ( Edited 2013-12-24 17:10)

no it is not, on a constructive critique you say the good AND the bad not just the bad or the good of the level, a critique with only good things in it is only encouragement, while a critique with only bad things makes the player feel bad and decreases his will to make it better, if you don't know how to do a professional critique like you think you are you just act like a hater and nobody likes haters. try to stick with the usual sandwich of good bad good so the creator don't do a suppuku later, we're not here to make people want to kill themselves, just to do the level better.

P#8105 2013-12-25 06:10 ( Edited 2013-12-25 11:10)

Alright then. Maybe I did stated everything that's bad because I found nothing interesting in his creation ? I dont wanna point out average stuff. I want to point out what's really good or really bad. His map is IMO really bad for a guy who got a free copy of the game and said that he will make "serious game", and that, everyone can agree with me. We can't compare this to D's map or to creative map like starship combat demo. If you say you'll make "serious game " be ready to receive " serious critique ".

P#8106 2013-12-25 09:32 ( Edited 2013-12-25 14:32)

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